Posted by VHunter on 7/13/2007, 8:14 am, in reply to "Re: I know I'm not Maureen but....." Your story sounds so intriguing! Are you suuure you don't want to post it!?!? lol --Previous Message--
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Indeed, my friend, we are the few, the proud, the deep! ![]()
The majority of films and books today are edited to please the public rather than be the best that they can be. One of the reasons I don't think I could ever make it as an author is that I would not sway to popular opinion. Which is, of course, not very good for business! But there is hope, movies like Spiderman 3 & Lord of the Rings ,for example, prove that. Now if only we can learn to write like Tolkien!
: Well, what got me on this was writing the A/Ns
: of the next CC chapter (that I was going to
: post that night...). As I wrote those words
: and realized what I needed to spell out then
: and there, I really did get depressed. And,
: I think it was because of reader
: expectations. That's when I started looking
: back at my "Of the Remaining" and
: seeing just how much the 'romance' factor
: really does turn people's heads.
:
: Of course, as for that story, I haven't even
: finished writing it yet. I may just finish
: it and give it to my editor (she can't wait
: to read it). There are too many
: questionable issues in the story that I just
: think no one else would really appreciate.
: ~sighs~
:
: Maureen, as for the depression thought, I
: didn't write the intro to make people feel
: depressed. I wrote it merely to introduce
: the setting for the rest of my story
: >_>. Odd, I know, but I'm an abnormal
: person indeed. At least my editor tells me
: so. As for slitting wrists...I am VERY
: sorry if anyone felt like doing that after
: my intro! It was good stuff to me, but
: then, it may have been a little hard core
: for less mature readers. One of the key
: things I wanted to do in the intro
: was....well, I'm not saying. It was one of
: the actual core points of using that scene
: as the intro, and I'm just guessing no one
: picked up on it (if anyone did, they haven't
: mentioned it). And as for Lestrade's flaw,
: well it was in there; I just didn't spell it
: out. This intro had a point, a very
: specific point and a very specific question.
: I just don't think anyone noticed.
:
: Boswell and VHunter, most of my favorite
: songs and stories are the sad ones. I just
: feel empty when I read a story that ends in
: 'happily ever after'. I suppose I just
: prefer realism; after a great struggle, are
: things really perfect? Can life be suddenly
: carefree and content? Doubtful. Those
: struggles are what, to me, makes the story
: worthwhile. Those are the stories you
: remember and those are the stories you look
: back on, and those are the stories that
: meant something. The happy ending where
: everything becomes lined in silver to me
: falsifies and diminishes the very struggle
: that gave the story meaning. For me, I feel
: that a situation should not be lightened
: merely for the reader. I would rather have
: something told to me straight than given a
: sugar-coated lie. Guess that makes us three
: deeper readers?
:
: The rest of the story was going to center on
: a different character and a new side
: character. It was certainly not going to be
: depressing, and most of the parts would not
: be that soul-wrenching, but, every part of
: the story was going to have a point. Now,
: looking at it, it probably is too deep to
: post and the structure isn't something
: anyone would like. Ah well. I just need to
: learn to give up on the world. Holding
: other people up to any kind of expectation
: at all is a bit of a stretch (hence the
: reason I had no expectations for the Eragon
: movie...).
:
: Ah well. I suppose the romance isn't bad
: (if taken in small doses). I just still
: wish that there were some deeper, angstier
: fics out there, and a few drama/tragedies to
: go with them
:
: ~CyleFlynt
:
: --Previous Message--
: You're absolutely correct, Maureen. The best
: stories may be sad, but they're not just
: plain depressing. Usually it's one of two
: ways: a mostly happy story with as sad
: ending; or
: a story that's sad throughout then has a
: happy ending. But there are a lot of readers
: and/or viewers that do enjoy stories of
: sacrifice. I think it's simply because
: people wish that they knew for certain that
: if they were given the kinds of choices the
: characters are given, that they too would do
: the right thing.
: Through much experience I've found that most
: people who have had troublesome lives enjoy
: mainly uplifting/happy stories. People
: who've lived perfectly good lives usually
: lean toward more tragic stories. But that,
: of course, is just an example of human
: nature. We always want whatever it is that
: we don't have.
:
: --Previous Message--
: But that's the point. People do need to
: learn
: to deal with hard times, and therefore
: stories should _deal_ with depressing
: subjects, but plan _not_ to depress the
: reader. Give people a sad ending or a happy
: ending, but not a pointless gray one.
:
: Most readers feel that life is too short for
: being programmed into a bout of depression,
: and they have a perfect right to resent
: being depressed by somebody else, on
: purpose. (Especially since depression's
: depth and frequency seems to be connected
: not just to neurochemistry, but also to
: certain bad habits of thought, like brooding
: or imagining that all is useless and
: everyone hates you.) Even a sad story needs
: moments when a bit of happiness or hope
: peeks through; or at least it ought to have
: changes of pace to give the reader a bit of
: a mental break. A satisfying story keeps the
: reader's enjoyment (and mental health!) in
: mind, as well as the fact that readers can
: easily choose not to read a story, or stop
: in the middle.
:
: Of course, it is difficult to prove to a
: reader that you are worthy of their trust.
: That's why stories need to start in an
: entertaining and interesting way; it's a
: sort of promise to the reader, or a payment
: in advance.
:
: Probably part of what makes tragedy sad but
: not depressing is that tragedies point out
: "If he hadn't done this, or this, he
: would have been all right. He could have
: chosen this other path, but chose not
: to." So perhaps tragedies believe in
: free will, but depressing stories don't.
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