Posted by Magna on 7/17/2007, 5:11 pm, in reply to "Outline" The field trip, the incident. Hugh comes home coughing, fever. Hugh tries to sneak in without drawing attention. Hoping Holmes is off on a case. Holmes is there though and heard the coughing, notices he looks flushed. Feels his forehead or tries to get Hugh to sit down, then the exchange of bodies. One of them calls for Watson's aid. Telling him to help the other to a chair and scan them for energy. They tell him what happened. Hugh in Holmes's body, fears Holmes's health, so afterwards he asks Watson to get Holmes a doctor. In between Watson being gone and coming back with doctor there is bonding, admissions and few funny comments. After which Holmes completely or partly loses consciouness. Hugh tends him, regreting what happened, then they switch back. Watson is finally back, the doctor cares for Hugh. Watson and Holmes talk abit. A few days later, Hugh is feeling better. Holmes and Hugh talk. Hugh calls Holmes "Father" as a sign of acceptance. The end --Previous Message--
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Well, we could start them in the moring when Hugh would be going to school. Maybe a brief discussion with Holmes about how he's not eating much and barely sleeps, Holmes asking him to take it easier. Shows concern for he adopted child/son/ward. Breaks off after Hugh leaves and makes a comment to Watson.
Ideas?
: Here is cool with me! Now down to business:
: what have you got so far?
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: I'll let you choose this time. If you like
: here is okay.
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: We should probably talk story outline first.
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: I agree. You can email me if you think it
: would be easier, or we can use ff.net PM, or
: here is fine too! But I'm ready whenever you
: are!
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: When your ready let me know. Also we should
: talk ideas.
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: lol Yes, I can see how that might be
: frustrating.
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: I know I am.
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: I just wish back then I knew how to put the
: girls down. My character, though lacking
: age, had a lot of women older then him
: interested in him. I couldn't find away to
: say no. I was too ashamed.
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: Oh, you make loads of sense! lol
: I used to do that in my own stories that I
: was writing as well. I'd put my characters
: thru all sorts of heck just because I was
: upset about something. Personally, I think
: we're nuts......
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: This discussion reminds me of when I was
: role
: playing. I kept beating my characters up for
: the fun of it. Poor Makato, who matchs Hugh
: in likeness and age, bore the the brunt of
: my aggression.
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: The big difference is of course I could
: throw him into fights when ever I liked and
: I could make him keep going, even with blood
: dripping from every limb of his body.
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: Story telling, if you did that Holmes
: wouldn't have to end up killing himself. The
: opening would finish him off before the
: story starts to make sense. Not that I make
: sense.
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