Posted by Magna on 7/18/2007, 3:17 pm, in reply to "Re: Outline" Of course it would envolve emplying that Hugh may have supernatural abilites that he isn't aware of. --Previous Message--
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I had an idea at one point of Hugh's subconscous as a part of the same person yet in like a seperate entity. Maybe while Holmes is in Hugh's body and unconous his has a discussion with it. It will almost be like a dream.
: I like it. Done correctly, I think it will be
: great! Just as long as you do all the
: technical explanations, we should be fine,
: lol. The only thing that might warrant a
: little extra explanation will be the fact
: that this is something Hugh did on purpose.
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: Well, we could start them in the moring when
: Hugh would be going to school. Maybe a brief
: discussion with Holmes about how he's not
: eating much and barely sleeps, Holmes asking
: him to take it easier. Shows concern for he
: adopted child/son/ward. Breaks off after
: Hugh leaves and makes a comment to Watson.
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: The field trip, the incident.
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: Hugh comes home coughing, fever. Hugh tries
: to sneak in without drawing attention.
: Hoping Holmes is off on a case. Holmes is
: there though and heard the coughing, notices
: he looks flushed. Feels his forehead or
: tries to get Hugh to sit down, then the
: exchange of bodies.
:
: One of them calls for Watson's aid. Telling
: him to help the other to a chair and scan
: them for energy. They tell him what
: happened. Hugh in Holmes's body, fears
: Holmes's health, so afterwards he asks
: Watson to get Holmes a doctor.
:
: In between Watson being gone and coming back
: with doctor there is bonding, admissions and
: few funny comments. After which Holmes
: completely or partly loses consciouness.
: Hugh tends him, regreting what happened,
: then they switch back.
:
: Watson is finally back, the doctor cares for
: Hugh. Watson and Holmes talk abit.
:
: A few days later, Hugh is feeling better.
: Holmes and Hugh talk. Hugh calls Holmes
: "Father" as a sign of acceptance.
:
: The end
: Ideas?
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: Here is cool with me! Now down to business:
: what have you got so far?
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: I'll let you choose this time. If you like
: here is okay.
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: We should probably talk story outline first.
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: I agree. You can email me if you think it
: would be easier, or we can use ff.net PM, or
: here is fine too! But I'm ready whenever you
: are!
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: When your ready let me know. Also we should
: talk ideas.
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: lol Yes, I can see how that might be
: frustrating.
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: I know I am.
:
: I just wish back then I knew how to put the
: girls down. My character, though lacking
: age, had a lot of women older then him
: interested in him. I couldn't find away to
: say no. I was too ashamed.
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: Oh, you make loads of sense! lol
: I used to do that in my own stories that I
: was writing as well. I'd put my characters
: thru all sorts of heck just because I was
: upset about something. Personally, I think
: we're nuts......
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: This discussion reminds me of when I was
: role
: playing. I kept beating my characters up for
: the fun of it. Poor Makato, who matchs Hugh
: in likeness and age, bore the the brunt of
: my aggression.
:
: The big difference is of course I could
: throw him into fights when ever I liked and
: I could make him keep going, even with blood
: dripping from every limb of his body.
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: Story telling, if you did that Holmes
: wouldn't have to end up killing himself. The
: opening would finish him off before the
: story starts to make sense. Not that I make
: sense.
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