Posted by VHunter on 7/21/2007, 5:58 pm, in reply to "Re: Outline" Ok, you said his mother committed some heinous crime & he saw her. I would perhaps say murder. Maybe he saw her kill someone & she said that if he tried to tell anyone they might think that he did it rather than her. But I can't quite decide who she should kill....I was leaning towards her husband, but now I'm not so sure.....maybe a 'close friend' of hers. That would give more weight to the probability of Holmes possibly committing the crime, since he would have motive. eeww.... --Previous Message--
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Lets see....for the childhood one right?
: *tries to find her home*
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: What do have in mind for an ouline of
: Holmes's traumatic experience?
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: Oh, I love those things! But they are really
: wild. It'd even weirder looking at your own
: house....yikes.
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: I'm going to make a small change... Hugh
: will
: say it was accident. If he pretended not to
: remember it would be seen as suspisous.
: Well, I've added a map of the sussex downs.
: I'm looking at a Google satillite map...
: Man, it's freaky.
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: Poor kid. No wonder he & Holmes work so
: well together. They both had crazy lives.
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: Hugh of course tries to save him buts she
: forced to turn back because it's winter and
: he's begining to sucome to the cold and he
: nearly freezes to deaht trying to get home
: to get help saving his friend.
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: His friend is never found and Hugh pretends
: not to remember.
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: That would certainly be traumatic.
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: Yes, the other falls or rolls accidently
: into
: the stream. They would be real close to it,
: up a steap hill.
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: Oh my gosh, that rather wild for a seven
: year
: old. And you said it was self-defence?
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: I was thinking he could smash him in the
: head
: with a rock and he rolls into a stream
: leading out to the ocean.
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: It's suppose to be happening at the cottage
: in sussex which is near the ocean.
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: How did Hugh kill his friend?
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: Maybe... Ten or fourteen for Holmes. Seven
: for
: Hugh.
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: Yikes, she sounds like a vicious creature.
: Yeah, that would work. But what did she do?
: And how old was he when it happened?
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