Posted by VHunter on 7/21/2007, 6:38 pm, in reply to "Re: Outline" --Previous Message--
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lol I was just about to suggest Paris. 
: *thinks* His mother according to my book was
: half french. Maybe his father is in france.
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: Yes. That would work. Maybe a business trip.
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: Mmm... Then the motives would shift to the
: father unless he was elsewhere with witness.
: Like on a hunting trip or visiting a friend.
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: Something along those lines. Or maybe he
: really likes his tutor, so it's like double
: shock. To find out his mother & the
: tutor were together & the tutor is now
: dead.
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: Yeah... Maybe he hates his tutor with
: avengance and his mother is cheating on his
: father with his tutor. His mother then
: murders him because he's blackmailing her
: with some scandalous letters.
:
: Is that what your thinking of?
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: True. Or maybe a tutor of his. That might
: work.
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: Well, the oldest I was thinking is 13.
: However
: he could have older friends.
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: Wait wait, so he's how old when all of this
: is
: going on?
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: I was thinking... Maybe she's having an
: affair
: with a close friend or enemy of Holmes?
: Maybe it's someone who he's fought with in
: the past who was blackmailing his mother?
: Maybe Holmes hated the person?
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: Lets see....for the childhood one right?
:
: Ok, you said his mother committed some
: heinous crime & he saw her. I would
: perhaps say murder. Maybe he saw her kill
: someone & she said that if he tried to
: tell anyone they might think that he did it
: rather than her. But I can't quite decide
: who she should kill....I was leaning towards
: her husband, but now I'm not so
: sure.....maybe a 'close friend' of hers.
: That would give more weight to the
: probability of Holmes possibly committing
: the crime, since he would have motive.
: eeww....
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: *tries to find her home*
:
: What do have in mind for an ouline of
: Holmes's traumatic experience?
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: Oh, I love those things! But they are really
: wild. It'd even weirder looking at your own
: house....yikes.
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: I'm going to make a small change... Hugh
: will
: say it was accident. If he pretended not to
: remember it would be seen as suspisous.
: Well, I've added a map of the sussex downs.
: I'm looking at a Google satillite map...
: Man, it's freaky.
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: Poor kid. No wonder he & Holmes work so
: well together. They both had crazy lives.
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: Hugh of course tries to save him buts she
: forced to turn back because it's winter and
: he's begining to sucome to the cold and he
: nearly freezes to deaht trying to get home
: to get help saving his friend.
:
: His friend is never found and Hugh pretends
: not to remember.
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: That would certainly be traumatic.
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: Yes, the other falls or rolls accidently
: into
: the stream. They would be real close to it,
: up a steap hill.
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: Oh my gosh, that rather wild for a seven
: year
: old. And you said it was self-defence?
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: I was thinking he could smash him in the
: head
: with a rock and he rolls into a stream
: leading out to the ocean.
:
: It's suppose to be happening at the cottage
: in sussex which is near the ocean.
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: How did Hugh kill his friend?
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: Maybe... Ten or fourteen for Holmes. Seven
: for
: Hugh.
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: Yikes, she sounds like a vicious creature.
: Yeah, that would work. But what did she do?
: And how old was he when it happened?
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